Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?
It is true that many countries have been under increasing pressure from finding other sources of energy due to their high demand these days. Some people say we should not use nuclear energy because it is too dangerous, while others claim that it is a superior alternative. Personally, I believe without atomic energy countries will not be able to meet their energy needs for the next century.
It is understandable why people discourage using nuclear energy due to two main reasons. First of all, during the World War, it was used for military purpose and caused serious consequences. In 1945, for instance, the atomic bomb dropped on Hiroshima destroyed 13 square kilometers of the city and almost 75,000 people were killed immediately. Also, because of its power, the producing process in stations has some certain risks of accident. The radiation from it could be released to the environment, people may be exposed to and suffer from severe health problems. Finally, the expenditure for constructing nuclear power plants is outrageous that several countries cannot be able to afford it.
From the positive side, nuclear energy brings us enormous benefits. Firstly, it is a sustainable energy source meaning it can produce a large amount of power without wasting limited natural resources like coal, oil or gas. Secondly, nuclear power stations are cleaner than fossil fuel power ones, and they could help reduce carbon emissions that cause global warming. With the development of nuclear technology, the risks of accidents are being mitigated. As a result, nuclear power is now being considered as a solution to high oil and gas prices, increasing demand for electricity, and the concern of pollution and climate change.
In conclusion, although nuclear power is regarded as a global threat due to its scaring power and wrong using purpose in the past, I believe the better alternative source of power is nuclear energy which can address issues such as fuel prices and environmental problems.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20061728395 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69406612818 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595679012346 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6859959969 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245099736961 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809251383974 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540548626307 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152774225356 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488502042993 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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