In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Transportation plays a vital role for a nation's infrastructure. High speed transportation would benefit widely for daily commuters like school and office people. Investing on very fast railway lines would benefit many ways. Governments should also invest in refurbishing existing transport modes which would also have advantages for local people. This essay will discuss about the advantages in improvements in transport infrastructure.
New railway lines for Bullet trains can help to connect long distance destination in ample time. Public transports can made use in an efficient manner and also can have less travel time. New improvements in transport could prevent a lot of congestion and also a reduction in pollution. for example, many industries are situated at the outskirts where people have to travel around 50 - 60 miles on a daily basis which could cause a lot of traffic and would affect health. situations like these could be avoided by improvements in high speed rails.
Though implementing fast trains would have many benefits, existing transport modes should also be taken into concern. improved existing transport would benefit the locals. People using their personal automobiles could be avoided and can reduce the emission of chloro fluro carbon and also could save fuel for future generations. Increased use of public transport can improve revenues for the nation. For example, replacing old public busses with new improved fuel efficiency busses can make compared to earlier times. School goers could make use of it as it would not only be safer and easier but also would save a larger amount of time.
Though transport is an important factor for a nation's development it also plays a vital role in making less harm for the environment. Development in infrastructure is necessary whereas as in also maintaining the existing transports. Improvements should be made based on impacts as well as advantages in concerns with the environments and public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, well, whereas, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 7.85571142285 306% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34294871795 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91307584539 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1854047203 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7368421053 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78947368421 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221221866336 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841677698971 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358221215865 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149240876928 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161573516002 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.