The number of people interested in cosmetic surgery is increasing in order to improve their physical appearance Why do people do operations to change the way they look Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The advancement in technology has shown it's impact on fields and cosmetic surgeries is also affected by this. There is a greater increase in number of plastic surgeries. Myriad of reasons behind this trend and I consider this notion as a negative development.
To commence with, numerous factors are responsible for increase in plastic surgeries among people. The primary reason is that the people are going through these operations to intend to look attractive and modern. Moreover, this trend is becoming a vouge among individuals. Afterwards, various celebrities involved in film industry are also a big consumer of this trend. They change their facial features time to time in order to remain young as well as to have their own place in their field. The film stars also have to compete with their competitors. So they give more preference to their physical appearance. In addition to this, the teenagers have a great influence over celebrities as they act as a role model for youngsters. In result, most of the adults follow their role models in many ways mostly in fashion.
However, it is a negative development. The foremost drawback is skin infections like skin cancer. According to a recent survey, most of the people who going through such surgeries are caused by skin cancer. Moreover, regular treatment is necessary for surgery's maintenance. So, folks have to go through number of extra chemically danger treatments. Almost all the operations which are included in cosmetic surgeries are highly expensive and time consuming. Furthermore, by eliminating natural skin cells, there are more chances of climate reactions.
To conclude, although this trend is increasing in modern era, it's pitfalls are at great extent which shows it's negative effects among individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...going through these operations to intend to look attractive and modern. Moreover,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, moreover, so, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24825174825 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82151367359 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3726140513 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.05 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178411805301 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499181360355 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380323948995 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933119717465 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414758808575 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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