The older generation tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is asserted that people in the old generation have traditional ideas and behavior that are not suitable for the young in the modern life. Although I agree that some notions are behind the time, I strongly believe that others are useful and give next generation good preparing for social life these days.
On the one hand, many conceptions of elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for the young. For job prospect, today young workers no longer see their work life as a vocation in the way their grandparents did, they expect variety and diversity from their careers. Furthermore, the great disparity (discrepancy) between generations is the attitudes towards gender roles. Young people opine that the notion of men and women, as the breadwinner and housewives, are misconception, hence they want to change the old-fashioned decision in relationships about who and when to marry.
On the other hand, some traditional views are invaluable and should not be forgotten. For instance, the characteristics as politeness and good manners is still benefit for young people in the competitive labor market. In the globalized world, it is necessary for people to conserve and proud of the ethnic identity and show it to the international friend with a view to giving them a good look for the nation. Moreover, due to the absence of technology in the past, people possess a good relationship with neighbors and society throughout the old styles in communication.
In conclusion, while the opinions of older people might unhelpful to the young generation, some ideas still have value and they are certainly applicable to the modern world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'benefited', 'benefitted'.
Suggestion: benefited; benefitted
...as politeness and good manners is still benefit for young people in the competitive lab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14074074074 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89946780983 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57037037037 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3452226106 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302632492003 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118001645454 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086376199282 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19797963148 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954672894704 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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