Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness is a basic sense that human seek and want to gain in the daily life. There is a host of reasons that attribute the happiness in different circumstance so that it is difficult to give the exact definition of happiness. Nonetheless, I opine that some common root factors can be figured out in the route to happiness achievement.
People define their happiness in specific way and by their own thought. Some people find that happiness is the sense of satisfaction they experience in their career. Einstein, for instance, is a renowned physicist who pursued the modern physics for the whole life, and he was rewarded by the Nobel Prize. For student ‘s perspective, happiness come when they obtain a high mark at school and that result can also make their parent take a lot of pride which can be a type of happiness. On an individual level, happiness for me was the precise point time when I proved myself that I could attain my goal due to the first prize in an academic competition five years ago.
Nonetheless, despite the differences in the happiness definitions, it is asserted that there are some determing factors that human need to get a pleasant sense. Firstly, it is absurd to argue that people can live happily without food and clothes. Hence, happiness just emerges when people can ensure their lives with the basic survival standard. Secondly, if students want to enjoy the great sense of achievement in future, they should set their own goal, stay on the track and pursue it regardless all the criticism. For example, doctor is a precious career, but medical students must undergo harsh pressure, self-doubt and a lot of difficulties before getting the fly colors.
In conclusion, the accurate definition of happiness is hard to figure out and although each person has his or her own way to get the pleasurable sense in life, common factors as living standard career pursuit are the common factors in the route to happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...to enjoy the great sense of achievement in future, they should set their own goal, stay o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88588588589 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69683380137 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564564564565 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6373662145 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19923047323 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749418346394 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047296776013 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135580310611 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465542150045 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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