It is irrefutable that experience develops with age, by this side senior citizens are more expeienced and have good knowledge about every aspect of life. However, some ideas of them may not well perfect for youngsters future.
To begin with, although older people are wide knowledge, but sometimes they are mot aware of the present day criterias. To enumerate, they may not be aware of the benefits of new distinct fields such as IIT sector, thus they push their kids to have degrees like engineering that may not be perfect for their children's life. Moreover, some olfer people have very rare opinions regarding some situations; such as weddings and other that seems very odd according to others as they may be of no use to young people in future. For instance older people follow some rituals and religious cremonies which can be a fool from the view of youngsters.
However, as older people are well experienced, they can provide enrich knowlede and can teach them how to respind to tougher situations of life and overcome impedes to achieve success. Moreover, youngsters are innocents, they are not aware about bad and good. Older people can show them right path and youngsters can make important decisions related to their business and others in their life by taking advice from seniors. What is more, seniors can teach good manners to youngsters such as politeness, patience and moral values that will turn them into good citizens.
To recapitulate, although some views and ways of older People may be inappropriate according to modern society, but senior citizens have a lot of knowledge regarding distinct aspect of life and they can guide youngsters in good way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s they may be of no use to young people in future. For instance older people follow some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03214285714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55829732519 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6425237603 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195026708564 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837706127636 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430958460611 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126764628247 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213698870944 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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