The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
It is true that the fierce competition in the job market between old people and their younger counterparts has become a widespread concern. This tendency has resulted in some problems, and effective solutions should be proposed to tackle these issues.
To begin with, the older generation has to encounter two main issues. First, due to age discrimination, older people often suffer more disadvantages when seeking the same positions as young candidates, even when they have similar abilities and qualifications. As a result, s number of them become unemployed, being unable to make ends meet and support their families. Second, old employees might be under strong pressure, which arises because their young colleagues seem to be more creative and adaptable to change in the workplace then they could do. These pressures might lead to both physical and psychological problems, including heart disease and depression.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps to address these problems. The first solution would be for the government to apply the labor law that prevents age discrimination in the workplace, which would give older people greater opportunities to find suitable jobs and earn a living. In addition to this, older employees should be willing to update their skills by attending extra training courses. If young colleagues also help them to adapt to changes in the working environment, older workers will gain confidence and improve their work performance.
In conclusion, the increasing competition between the old and the young in the labor market leads to several negative effects, and several actions need to be taken to address these issues, not only by the government but individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39051094891 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90234114147 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.02162418 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.083333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113011577978 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426797733354 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368746012569 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710180949399 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355854693655 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.