The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
Many seniors today till have to compete with youngsters to seek jobs. While this trend results in some problems, we can mitigate by some interventions.
In terms of drawbacks, older competitors may cause some negative effects. Firstly, the surge in older applicants can dominate the significant number of vacancies in a fiercely competitive labour market today. Many students who graduate from universities every year have a thirst for jobs in order to make ends meet, however, they have to fiercely compete with older counterparts who have more experiences. Secondly, it is clear that younger employees have better adaptability than older ones, and therefore, if workforces are accounted for a major part by seniors, it probably leads to less flexibility and slow response to environmental changes.
Nevertheless, this trend can be tackled in some ways, which can be implemented by governments and individuals. Firstly, governments should regulate unemployment rate to meet labour demand in their countries. Unless governments’ remedies are effective, there would be an increasing trend of crimes and poverty due to the high unemployment rate among youngsters. Secondly, companies’ boards should encourage youngsters to support older employees so that they can adapt better to changes. Perfect combinations between young people’s adaptabilities and the old’s experiences are proved to help companies to cope with difficulties more efficiently.
In conclusion, while a working population is occupied with high-age those can lead to some disadvantages, I believe that we totally overcome the disadvantages by efforts of both governments and individuals.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71774193548 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27716177233 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.316403563 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245921021025 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826923837758 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518999936097 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145497860967 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570681074201 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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