Many people think that people’s ’success only when he earns much money. I know the importance of earning money. From my perspective, I do not agree that earn much money is only way to succeed . The reasons for my support of this view are outlined as follows.
Firstly, in my opinion, I think the thinking method of that money is the best gives people a sense of desire and force people to earn more money. The chasing money way causes the world become more greedy.On the other hand, because of the appetites many people embark on the road of crime, those money criminals behaviors lead to many family’s broken and sadness, for example, I have watched on the TV, a public officer can not resist the tempt of money, he stole the public fund by secret , in the end, he suffered the law sanction.
Secondly, I think that the ways of success are different from people to people. It is hard to define what is the real success. In my opinion, I prefer that owning happiness is the real success because happiness is the most important and valuable thing in the world, many of us do not have the happiness for some reasons, but there are different ways to have happiness besides earning much money, such as making friends and a good relationship of your parents. What’s more, successes are often defined by others that you are whether successful or not, only you feel you are successful that you can be really a successful man.
Overall, money is not the only measure of success. Anyone can be successful, whether they are rich or poor. What matters is how one views himself, if one is proud of achievement in life, and feels that he has lived a fulfilling life, then he is successful.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t earn much money is only way to succeed . The reasons for my support of this view...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...way causes the world become more greedy.On the other hand, because of the appetite...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the TV, a public officer can not resist the tempt of money, he stole the public fund by s...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...oney, he stole the public fund by secret , in the end, he suffered the law sanctio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64238410596 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55235178879 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533112582781 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.403183319 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325716916457 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129779088438 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778835078995 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19964928974 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821874015657 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.