The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that driving offences should be taken many types of stricter punishment to improve safety when people take part in traffic on roads. While I accept that stricter punishment is one of the most effective way, I believe that there are many other measures to reduce accidents.
On the one hand, it is true that stricter punishment can solve many problems of road accidents which can be caused by drivers who exceed the speed limit or use mobile phone while driving, if drivers know that they can receive some punishments like serving a prison sentence because of their harmful habits they will likely become law-abiding citizens and be more carefully drive person. This, therefore, reduces a number of traffic accidents.
On the other hand, governments have many types of measures apart from stricter punishment to protect traffic participants. Firstly, enhancing a number of traffic policemen in the regularly accident roads to ensure nobody breaks the law. People are less likely to have criminal acts when policemen are in there. Secondly, raising people’s awareness about the harms of traffic violation is the most effective way to decrease the number of crashes. It is necessary to educate students when they study in primary school by organizing some competitions or answering the question about signs as well as traffic rules, or even watching the images about the accident images, for example. Finally, authorities should spend more money in improving technology as well as using more devices to control traffic on road such as installing camera at the hot traffic points.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that stricter punishment is a measure to reduce a number of traffic accidents, but I believe there are many other solutions can also deal with this problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16095890411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64820376956 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565068493151 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7828317024 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132916153675 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523958841529 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407845686001 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092243538245 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445806294876 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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