The only way to improve safety of our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?
According to statistics from local authority, more and more persons are injured or die due to traffic accidents. Many people think that the best way to improve road safety is by giving harder penalties to careless drivers. From my perspective, I am only in partial agreement with this view because of reason analyzed in the below essay.
On the one hand, stricter punishments should be enacted to decrease the number of traffic accidents. There is true that the irresponsible drivers use mobile phone when they are driving, hesitate and decide to exceed the speed limit ar consume alcohol before driving. Thus, more severe punishments such as monetary fine, imprisonment, holding driver’s licence or prohibiting drivers from driving for a period of time, which should be acted as a deterrent to those who traffic carelessly. Additionally, the responsibility of policemen play a vital role in bettering the safety of our roads. They do as a reminder to prevent people from ignoring and violating the traffic laws and arrest offenders instantly or adjust the traffic flows in case of congestions.
On the other hand, many other ways which should not be overlooked are positive effects to decline accidents. initially, education should be considered. All people are educated traffic law before issuance of licence, the educational campaigns of rules carry out to raise the public awareness via media or banners. Moreover , improving the transportation infrastructure seems a potential solution to address traffic accident issue. The low-quality narrow streets or the lack of signals roads are also the major factors of the occurrence of numberous traffic accidents.
In conclusion, although the stricter punishments can contribute to improvement of safety of our roads. I also believe other options could be considered as effective solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39792387543 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00695982218 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63321799308 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2324782865 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159203698039 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532176299499 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670131040838 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102003103166 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407675487815 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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