Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries. Do you agree or disagree.
It is argued that teaching children the literature of their own country more important than that of other countries. To a certain extent I agree that it is beneficial to children when they study literature of their nation. However, I also believe that learning foreign literature is equally important.
There are several positive impacts of learning literature from the local resources. Firstly, youngsters will have more opportunities to know about their own traditional and historical heritage. For example, in Vietnam, through literary works, children could understand fully the meaning of Tet holiday and the image of "Banh Tet" in this occasion. Moreover, literature books record what ancestors did in the past and how they sacrified themselves for the independence of nation. These will help the young generation know thoroughly about their country. Thus, they will cherish the beauty of culture of their country as well as developing children's patriotism and they could make every possible effort to develop country.
On the other hand, I think the literature of other nations are approached to the children is equally important. Initially, through the foreign literature books, the knowledge of children are broadened. They can absorb history, cultural, traditional values of different nations on the world. That is beneficial to students who want to study abroad because of helping them to avoid cultural shock as well as being familiar with other societies and manners. In additional, understanding both local and foreign literature give the young persons chances to share their knowledge and adapt to another culture easily when they live and study in abroad.
In short, both of these aforementioned factors, I believe the significance of local and foreign literature can not be brought into comparison to see which one is more important because they have.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, i think, in addition, in short, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44709897611 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83341823946 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542662116041 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1239191616 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292714590605 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110223471069 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142747323448 0.0667982634062 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209070236648 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156947274217 0.056905535591 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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