In the future, we will have more and more leisure time as machines replace many of the tasks we do at home and at work. Discuss the benefits this will bring and also the problems it will cause.
In recent years, science and technology have advanced enormously. Many kinds of modern machines are created to help people do many of the task in the workplace or housework and people will help more leisure times. For this movement, this will bring benefits and also cause the problems.
On the one hand, the replacement is able to offer positive points. Firstly, many kinds of machine such as a dishwasher, a vacuum cleaner, a washing machine can help people to do housework. As a result, a housewife or individuals who have heavy workload at their companies all day have just spent a little time to do housework. Therefore, they have free time to hang out with their friends to relax or to do the gym for physical exercise. Like to me, using machines to wash clothes, clean the floor, it result that I have more time to teach my child, help him to do homework. Besides, machines will replace many tasks of people in business. For instance, we can do our works with a computer easily. A computer can analyze a massive amount of data extremely exactly and rapidly. In accountancy, all reports can be done on time and correct by the support of machines.
On the other hand, there are some detrimental impacts of machines. Initially, people depending on machines and muscle activities are less and less. Doing housework seem to do physical exercise and be more useful for our health. Moreover, we become lazier and fatter as well as take more risks of diseases. Teenagers in families are unknown how to do housework by themselves, and they can do nothing without machines. In business, individuals are lazy in thinking. When machines are broken, they are unable to do anything to finish their works, which causes many serious problems about deadline of reports to manage business.
In conclusion, the development of technology and the appearance of modern machines make our life more comfortable and convenient. We have more free time for our families and our works can be handled easily. However, we should use machines reasonably. Sometimes we do something by ourselves so that we can solve anything in any hard circumstance without machines and keep us not be lazy in thinking and doing exercises.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...acturing industry has developed highly, many kind of modern machines are made to replace ...
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Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many kinds'.
Suggestion: Many kinds
...ement is able to offer positive points. Many kind of machine such as a dishwasher, a vacu...
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Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...es to wash clothes, clean the floor, it result that I have more time to teach my child...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
.... Moreover, we become lazier and fatter as well as take more risks of diseases. Te...
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Line 5, column 581, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reports managing'.
Suggestion: reports managing
...many serious problems about deadline of reports to manage business. In conclusion, the develop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85405405405 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69344902321 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.023174261 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400904175051 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105781900461 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823380245631 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264789292428 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102028042003 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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