Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others , howevers, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
There are many different views about the role of sports in our life. Many people believe that sports play a great role in society while others think that it seems a kind of spare time activity. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will consider now.
On the one hand, there are several advantages which make us believe that sports are so important to society. Firstly, sports are crucial for mental and physical health of a person. It helps a player reach a fitness goal and keep up a heathy weigh. Exercising is also a natural way to loosen up and let go of stress. As a result, physically and mentally strong people can contribute the development the nation by increasing the economic productivity. Moreover, doing exercises regularly can prevent some dangerous diseases like cancer and obesity which can reduce the heavy on government’s budget. Secondly, players can improve their teamwork skills. Joining in team sport and fighting for a common goal with a group of players and coaches teach the participants how to build teamwork and effectively communicate to solve problems. This experience is helpful when encountering problems at work or at home. Besides that, international sports competition can promote better relations between countries, create favorable conditions for economic development in the era of globalization.
However, there are contrast ideas that sports are only recreational activities in their free time. Many persons spend all their time for working and their housework. Thus they do exercises or playing sports when they have free time to refresh their body and mind. For instance, parents and their children are able to go swimming together in their leisure time to relax and take more interaction. Moreover, there are few people can play sports as a professional and earn money primarily from sports. Hence, sports are likely entertainment activities in their leisure time.
In conclusion, while some people think sports are the same as leisure activity, I still believe that sports play a great role to society because of its advantages to people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16715542522 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79532600784 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4920979945 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223892497457 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633533309697 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579252251396 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152847648428 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537473815818 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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