People living in large cities today face many problmes in their averyday life. What are these problems ? Should governments ecourage people move to smaller regional towns?
It is an obvious that most big cities are the center of education, health, commerce or entertainment. At first glance, living in large cites brings only benefits. However, further consideration of this issue reveals that this also has drawbacks. Thus, some people think that government should encourage people to migrate to smaller regional towns. In my opinion, I totally agree with this for several reasons.
There are many disadvantages for people who live in big cites. Firstly, the main issue which citizens living in great cities cope with is traffic jams. More and more people move to large cities to have better life, it leads to crowded population and mass quantity of cars and vehicles. The streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded, especially in crush hour. It often takes us a long time to go home from work or school because of traffic congestion. The second problem is the noise and air pollution due to a large of number vehicles and industries which release exhaust fumes into the air and make a lot of noise. These cause the life in big cities becomes unhealthy and more stressful and city dwellers to be easy under stress. In additional, the pressure on urban housing supply system is a huge issue. More and more persons from rural areas move to big cities for living and working that will result in greater demand for accomodation. Hence it is likely to push up property prices and rents. As a result, people live in extremely narrow place.
Since such above issues, the government should encourage citizens to move away from major cities. Initially, it will reduce the number of vehicles in cities, which will definitely improve the situation where air pollution caused by traffic disturbs the lives of city residents. Furthermore, fewer people living in big cities will relieve the pressure on these cities’ housing supply systems when many people are living reluctantly in small, suffocating spaces. I think this is extremely important point to consider because living spaces are linked to people’s mental health and how they perform at work..
In short, it is clear that there are various reason for people living in large cities face in their life everyday, migration to large cities to live and work is usually many rural people’s first choice. The important thing is the government should issue policies to promote people, especially students or talented people to stay or return to smaller towns to live and work. This is one of the best way to reduce pressure on big cities as well as bridge the gap between the urban and rural.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, i think, in addition, in short, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94236311239 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61730496459 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524495677233 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8163125537 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9545454545 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325477334729 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859299137371 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742531301999 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170411527527 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100115230994 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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