People living in large cities today face many problmes in their every day life. What are these problems ? Should governments ecourage people move to smaller regional towns?
It is true that the life in large cities is more opportunities and convenient. However, there are several drawbacks which people living in there have to face every day. In my opinion, I think government encourage people to migrate to smaller regional towns.
The main issue which citizens living in great cities cope with is traffic jams. More and more people move to large cities to have better life, it leads to crowded population and mass quantity of cars and vehicles. The streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded, especially in crush hour. It often takes us a long time to go home from work or school because of traffic congestion. The second problem is the pollution. The emission from cars and vehicles make air quality poor while the area for planting trees is very small. As a result, the polluted air is a huge issue. The life in big cities becomes unhealthy and more stressful.
In additional, the pressure on urban housing supply system is a huge issue. More and more persons from countryside move to big cities for living and working that will result in greater demand for housing. Hence, it is likely to push up property prices and rents. The persons live in extremely narrow place.
Since such issues are serious, the government should take steps immediately to address these problems. The government’s budget can be used to invest in the countries’s transport network as well as improving facilities in smaller towns. Moreover, better salaries for citizens could also live and work in these towns. The hard problems would be tackled, the pressure of urban life is decreased.
In short, it is clear that there are various reasons for people living in large cities face in their life every day and steps should be taken into consideration to solve the problems. The government should issue policies to promote people transfer to smaller towns. This is one of the best way to reduce pressure on big cities as well as narrow the gap between large cities and small towns.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'live'
Suggestion: live
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, i think, in addition, in short, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93274853801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59021586378 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529239766082 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 13.0 2.52805611222 514% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4591325802 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6818181818 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344806131285 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886524719586 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850087850702 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204168356763 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117956952411 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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