Open plan office no walls no barriers Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

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Open plan office no walls no barriers. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern days, workplaces are no longer limited to simple box office with walls and barriers but extended to numerous designs, with open plan office being one of the most popular. Personally, I find the layout rather beneficial, as benefits do outweigh drawbacks in this scenario.
First to mention, it is privacy that comes as the biggest ‘red flag’. In other words, workers often experience lack of personal space, what is more, sensitive work occasionally appear, in which situation the ability to see each other’s screen is a hindrance. Moreover, as one has to share the desk with another and the room with many others, it seems difficult for them to focus on the tasks. This is particularly problematic when working in call centers, where noise contamination is prominent.
Nevertheless, open workrooms are not in favor for no reason from my point of view. First of all, the structure creates an environment where all co-workers are encouraged to cooperate. Indeed, teamwork is one vital aspect when regarding desk work. For instance, without any form of blockade, communications between colleagues is made trouble-free, thus fast-forward the tasks assigned and boost employee relations. Furthermore, the fee required to build separators are excluded, therefore save the budget to a certain extent. Last but not least, such spaces allow companies to be more dynamic with the designs as well as be exposed to more fluid working conditions. In particular, the model can be easily modified to be suitable for company size, regardless of small or large.
In conclusion, there are few minus points to the idea of open-plan office. However, I favor the concept with evident advantages regarding better cooperation, budget-saving and flexibility.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29749103943 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96988390833 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691756272401 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7373378323 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6666666667 7.06120827912 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169660779119 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456176775074 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808789150301 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117286455947 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12407800212 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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