Choosing the most appropriate power in order a player to success in sports is a controversail issue. There are many who opine that the players need muscular strength, while others think that the strenght of mentality is crucial. In my opinion, physical stamina is more crucial than mental agility.
On the one hand, mental strength is really important when you play a game. Players should be focused on their goal and their attention never be distracted. LIkewise, they must never loose their heart while the opposition is going to gain the match. Loosing their heart results to loosing their mental strength and their performance. For example, according to a survey, the majority of winning games of the Barcelona Football Team are owed to the willingness and concentration of its players.
On the other hand, physical strenght is even more important. Since the sports are not mind games, there is not much that a player can achieve by simpoly being mentally strong and concentrated. To illustrate this, in football players have to play for 90 minutes long or more. They have to run, jump and defend and all of these activities are performed by bodily strength. Of course, their mental concentration to the goal will help them achieve it. However, this is not sufficient for a total success.
To sum up, even if players need both mental and physical strength to win a game, in athletic events the physical strength a lot more crucial, because success is entirely depend on a player's ability to polay tirelessly for the entire duration of the game.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: lose
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...ing their heart results to loosing their mental strength and their performance. F...
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Suggestion: depended
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...because success is entirely depend on a players ability to polay tirelessly for the ent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, really, while, for example, of course, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9465648855 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63376479104 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9814477351 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27762101063 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889083584104 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540482614226 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167793026748 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435683127802 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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