The table reveals data on how Canadians spend their free time in a year in terms of their age groups.
Overall, it is obvious that the most preferable leisure activity of people of all ages in Canada is watching TV or videos, while cinema is the less popular activity.
Looking at the graph in more detail, teenagers and 70-aged people invest almost the same amount of time in TV programs, with teens spending 1,200 hours and the elderly 100 hours less. On the other hand, cinema is the less desirable free time activity, since only teens spend 100 hours watching movies in the cinemas and all the other groups spend far few hours there.
Among the four other activities, the preferences depend on the age. In specific, it is clear that the two younger groups of teens and 20s spend more or less 400 hours on doing sports and socializing with 4 or more people, whereas the older groups spend roughly 200 hours in a year on socializing with 4 or less people and exercising on their own. By contrast, Canadians between 30 and 40 invest only 50 hours a year in socializing with 4 or more people, while those between 50 and 70 halve this time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ours in a year on socializing with 4 or less people and exercising on their own. By ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas, while, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56038647343 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29654132978 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51690821256 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3030775274 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152557745312 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773210157149 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240841707159 0.0843802449381 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097601954654 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016163500513 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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