In order to be successful in sport some people think you have to be physically strong Others say that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether physical strength or mental power is more important in participating in sports has caused controversy. Although physical fitness is a prerequisite for any athlete, I believe that mental strength will be the deciding factor in professional sports.
Advocates of the physical strength make the point that physical abilities are all it takes for athletes to win any sport. For example, Cristiano Ronaldo is known as a legendary footballer because he has been constantly striving to improve his health and skills. Ronaldo has trained himself nearly four times more intensive than the average player, which has helped him become one of the world’s leading attackers in football because of his superior strength and sharp skills. It is apparent that you cannot participate in sports with a weak body and unhealthy muscles.
Notwithstanding the benefits recognized above, I still claim that mental strength is the power helping great athletes conquer outstanding victories, regardless of age and physical prowess. Roger Federer is a standout example for this case. He won Wimbledon, one of the Grand Slams for tennis around the world for a record eighth time at the age of 35. At this age, there were certainly many younger, healthier tennis players with better endurance and stamina than him, but Roger Federer still outperformed and triumphed over all other athletes to become the record-holding champion. He is a living proof that the will and spirit are what separate great players from good ones.
In conclusion, although physical strength is always required for everyone to do sports, I still place much more importance on the mentality aspect that is the crucial factor helping an athlete passionately participate in any sport match and surpass the rest. An athlete should combine both of these factors to create lifetime breakthroughs.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
The question of whether physical strength or mental power is mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28956228956 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81381581357 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602693602694 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3827045264 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169654158003 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632785831631 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642700305353 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121687107415 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726309588184 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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