The chart above gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006

Essay topics:

The chart above gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006

The bar chart illustrates the age of females in Australia when they had their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.
Overall, while group of women aged 25-30 was by far the most popular for giving birth, a reverse pattern can be seen to group of women who are over 40.
In 1966, the percentage of females aged 19-24 held the lion’s share, at 62%, which was roughly twice as much as that of women aged under 19. Both figures then experienced a significant decrease, with 29% and 12% respectively in 2006.
By contrast, in the year of 1966, the ratio of women aged 30-34 and 34-39 held low positions among all the factors surveyed, at 12% and 9% respectively. Luckily, they then gathered pace and witnessed an exponential growth in their percentage at the end of the survey. ( It is noted that the proportion of the former was much higher than that of the latter). Both the ratio of females aged 25-30 and over 40 experienced a fluctuating leapfrog. However, while the former held the runner-up (at 39%) in comparison with the others, the latter took up a minority of 4%, making it become the lowest point in the survey given.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55940594059 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48193650657 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9459903863 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268346038999 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107693913708 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147489427634 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206661467993 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17475808842 0.0819641961636 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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