In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all
students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free
for everyone.
To what extent do you agree?
In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all
students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free
for everyone.
To what extent do you agree?
Pursuing university education in recent times, involves paying large amount of money as school fees, which many students can not afford. Some individuals are of the opinion it should be free of no charges. While I agree that university education should not be costly, I do not believe it should be free for all students.
People who argue that studying in the university should be without a cost have one major reason for this statement. They say that through this means every individual in the society will have the opportunity of acquiring university degree, and eventually possess all the necessary skills to survive in the competitive labour market. Togo, a small country in West Africa, is a good example as the government of the nation made it mandatory for all her citizens to go through tertiary education on scholarship. As a result of this, about 78% of the total adult population of Togolese are graduate. Therefore, because of the magnanimity of the Togolese government, almost every individual are equipped for the job market.
Other group of individuals on the other hand, hold the view that tertiary education should not be free of charge for everyone, even though the students should not be made to pay exorbitant tuition. They based their argument that if learning in the university is without a cost, many pupils will have nonchalant attitude towards their study as they are not responsible for the fees. Consequently, many of the graduates would not strive hard to attain academic excellence, and invariably they would become graduates without substantial skills. For instance, graduates from Scoff university, which is located in the Eastern part of Nigeria, are always found wanting in terms performance at workplaces. The reason that was given for this awful exhibition of character was tailed down to the fact that everyone that studied at the university did not pay school fees because tertiary education in the region was free of charge. Hard it been the students were to pay a small amount of money as tuition, perhaps, many would have worked harder in school to distinguish themselves in the labour market.
In conclusion, even though I agree that acquiring university education has come with paying huge amount of tuition fees and many students can not be able to afford it, I think it should not be free of charge for everyone because of possible carefree attitude from the pupils. I believe that if the students were to pay little amount of money as school charges, it will stimulate them to work hard and these will make them outstanding even as graduates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2370.0 1615.20841683 147% => OK
No of words: 471.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03184713376 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6738142408 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456475583864 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.0 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3632715682 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.736842105 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7894736842 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.551868352369 0.244688304435 226% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182378563372 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170869804124 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352258222007 0.151304729494 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153904180063 0.056905535591 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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