Ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazines or watching tv. Why do they do this? Do you think it is a good idea to copy famous people?
Celebrities nowadays are being copied by their actions by ordinary people such as watching television or reading magazines. This essay will discuss about the reasons behind their actions and my opinion if copying famous people is a right thing to do.
With the myriad of entertainment in our society, a lot of people are fanatically get themselves involved to their famous idols, particularly the world of show business. They tend to act based on what they see on the people they idolized. For instance, an actor who showed kindness and generosity to under privileged giving all 80 percent of his total income as an actor, this would mark each people and will follow their doings. It is a virus that affects people in a positive way. Additionally, pretending to be somebody is one way of expressing who we are and it will help us to strive harder enabling us to reach what we would like to be in the future.
The outcome of copying of people has its own negative and positive aspects. Negative in a way that it doesn’t see others your real identity. And would cause sometimes chaos and often resulting to poor judgment. A common example of this is copying a renowned singer with a lot of tattoo marks in his body, you always participate on his concerts and you even copied his designed tattoo in this body in your body with that people misjudge you, thinking like you are some a freak minded person.
Imitating a person freely express individuals what is inside them. Their ideals and personality of a person how they wanted to be is very much important. However, our cruel society are more misinformed, and prejudgment is widely spread that often give as negativity in our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'cause'.
Suggestion: sometimes cause
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6397560142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0957539052 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301690186915 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931400630516 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915810220972 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172941801143 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11781207015 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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