Some people believe that is best to a accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Challenges are part of our lives and it is where people are tested on how to deal with those struggles. People tend to be numbed handling problems such as job dissatisfaction and insufficient money and live the day as it is without finding any solutions. It is argued that this situation should be accepted whilst the others strongly believe that this should be solved. This essay strongly agrees the later statement because it will lead a positive outcome in each individual and will further discuss both points of view.
Vast majority of the population are somewhat contented of their current situation, for example having unpleasant employment and facing financial crisis, they opt to accept the current state without further setting plans to overcome this problematic condition. This state has been common to the society resulting to high percentage of poverty. In addition, employers are more focus on their income not on to their employees and due to difficulties in job hunting workers tend to stay.
Striving for improvement and focusing on solutions in a bad situation will result to progress. For instance, a crisis in finances and insufficient salary to meet the daily needs of the family. To be able to work out these difficulties, an additional job could help or seek another company with better monthly compensation.
In summary, there are positive and negative outcome on the selective response of people in regards with their status in life. It is very essential to find alternative solutions on each struggles for a normal and fruitful life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 45, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'outcomes'?
Suggestion: outcomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16015625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81210934787 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8708021868 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.083333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159621151917 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468062445993 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407960840975 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780561511767 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055407479259 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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