Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to change our character traits.
To what extent do you agree ?
Genes play a major role in building a basic architecture of people’s personality and character traits. But, I believe there are few things where we as an individual has an ability to alter and restructure our character based on our experiences, we learn throughout our life.
Genes are not only the blueprint of our personality, but it is the fundamental unit of life that holds all the information needed for an organism to form and exist in this world. All the living organisms have their pair of chromosomes, genes, and DNA, which has a plethora of diversities. Inheritance of a Personality is a broad topic with much complexity, and for a better understanding we need to incorporate the knowledge based on scientific research and should not rely only on the biased side of personal opinion. Some involuntary activities like the way people speak, walk, run and other activities are directly influenced by the genes from their parents.
To a certain degree even before people are born, their personalities are preplanned and set in place to be executed accordingly. On the contrary, due to certain Biological, Social, Psychological and environmental reasons, they will try to adapt and develop new personality traits or even get rid of their own character traits. For instance, Suicidal tendencies and depression are said to be inherited and hence a person may experience suicidal thoughts in their lifetime. Nevertheless, if they understood the repercussions of such thoughts by taking proper medical guidance and with prognostic behavioral modifications they can even build a character mechanism which act opposite to their inherited character trait.
Hence, I firmly believe that genes have an enormous role in constructing our basic structure, but Human has the ability to learn and overcome certain aspects of those inherited traits with appropriate stimulus and constant effort.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 502, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...uld not rely only on the biased side of personal opinion. Some involuntary activities like the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32558139535 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12886971914 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594684385382 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.196617052 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.727272727 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246725172987 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854606885059 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635695203866 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14988648603 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724364338245 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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