With out capital punishment（the death penalty）our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion？
Before talking about the essential role of death penalty, you have to think about the meaning，and the purpose, of any kind of punishment. If you consider that the purpose is to prevent the guilty from being nasty again，you can be seduced by an argumentation in favour of the suppression of capital punishment. But you have to think about another aspect of the problem：a punishment is also useful to impress people，to make them fear the law. In fact，let’s take the example of a young misfit，which has grown in a violent atmosphere，influenced by older delinquents，etc. He lives in the streets；he’s got no aim but to survive. This is the kind of person who could possibly kill some one for money，or even for fun. Why would he fear prison？
Life would be easier for him there. In addition in many cases，when you behave normally，you can benefit from penalty reductions. This young misfit needs to be impressed，he needs to know that the law is a frontier. When you cross it，you can lose your life. That is why capital punishment helps keeping a distance between robbery and murder. If you abolish it，you suppress the difference between these two types of crime，which are completely different.
But there is also a limit to de fine：even if death penalty is unavoidable，it would be a crime to apply it to inadequate cases. If there is no premeditation or past facts which can justify such a punishment，it is far too strict to apply death penalty. That is why the lawmakers have to establish precisely the context in which capital punishment can be pronounced. That is the price to pay to limit violence without using excessive violence.
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... a distance between robbery and murder. If you abolish it，you suppress the differe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in addition, in fact, kind of, talking about, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10507246377 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.4846465387 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.669348078 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181428370134 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578687825375 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341782903674 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127650196422 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205219333542 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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