Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems
In the recent years, the number of people living in cities has considerably increased, which has detrimental effect on environment and human. This essay will provide some problems the situation brings and solutions to solve the problems.
Overpopulation causes some serious problems which are related to environment and community. Firstly, increasing populations pollutes air, land and water. For example, the amount of exhaust fumes from vehicles dramatically increases, which is one of some causes to contaminate air. Moreover, overpopulation leads to increase in the amount of garbage. This situation negatively impacts on land and water environment. Besides, another problem is that the rate of unemployment is high. Because, there are a lot of people in the working age, therefore it is hard to find a good job with high salary. As a result, many people have to face to some difficulties when they live in cities.
However, there are some solutions to tackle these problems. Firstly, government should spend much money on developing and improving infrastructure in the rural areas to encourage people to continuously live in there. By building many hospitals and schools, government can enhance the life of everyone, which makes them feel confident in the future. Besides, government could introduce some policies to support for people living the rural areas. They have enough money to grow plants and feed animals, which enables their life become more stable. Therefore, they will not want to move to cities and overpopulation will be solved.
In conclusion, there are many problems which government and community have to face when overpopulation takes place. Therefore, everyone and government should try to solve this situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46125461255 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95286427312 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5968141194 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.2222222222 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139757280953 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042682985308 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392904476491 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806821234302 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336938024915 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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