The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?
To have enough materials and energy to supply demand, many nations encourage exploiting their natural resources arbitrarily. This action causes the depletion of resources due to their limitation, risking environmental sustainability. Therefore, I vote for controlling and using natural resources efficiently.
Natural resources are a gift from the earth, and they are a vital thing in our life. With the current population development, we are using more resources than any time in the human history. We use many of these resources in our daily life, we destroy forests to provide enough wood for green buildings and furniture, exploit crude oil for energy, and mine minerals to supply steel and other metals for heavy industry. Our demand is unlimited, but the resources are not. Even renewable resources, such as water or wood, if not used prudently, they could become rare and disappear in the short term.
To prevent overuse of these resources, all nations should encourage people to use materials efficiently, with governments establishing reserves to protect natural resources. For example, they could save ancient forests and/or mineral mines for future generations. In addition, they should apply more advanced technology to their processing to reduce the demand of resources. This idea needs the transfer of know-how from developed countries to developing countries to improve their manufacturing. This will give us enough time to find artificial replacement for natural resources in the future.
In conclusion, natural resources are depleting and ringing warning bells for all of us. It is our responsibility to save it for human future, and each national government also has guarantee that this will be happen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'guaranteed'.
Suggestion: guaranteed
..., and each national government also has guarantee that this will be happen.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.143333333333 0.155533422707 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.123333333333 0.0946595960268 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0333333333333 0.0501214627716 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0437548338989 152% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0366666666667 0.0403226058552 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95889631479 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466666666667 0.0326793684256 143% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.07 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02 0.021408717616 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1722.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.44943820225 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408239700375 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337078651685 0.28420135186 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232209737828 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.202247191011 0.137316102897 147% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95889631479 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.7152709267 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8699835522 49.517814964 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.8 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.814263465372 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 51.5078651685 49.1944974215 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.58904109589 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342060337286 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0895250037622 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0608589781397 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.532600292056 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.106776045185 0.148594505496 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141972578319 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742338679623 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.301486344063 0.324371583561 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0280600322777 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230788527733 0.228012699653 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719361890474 0.058150111329 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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