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Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Essay topics: Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

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Whether or not parents are the best teachers we can debate about it endlessly. People are divided into two groups. Some people disagree this statement, but I am in that group who support that idea.
Firstly, I people started to learn from their birth. We learned little things of course, but most of learned skills are important. And it does not mean that our father or mother will or should teach us to step by step. Children can follow their parents. Even in Azerbaijan, where I am from has such a belief " You will teach your children with your motions. Begin to educate yourself ".
We are educated with our parent's motion, character. They teach us to important things in our life. If exemplify it they teach how to be friendly, kind, how to speak, how to be honest. These statements are more important characters in our life, of course, after children start to learn from their surrounding, school.
I am 30 years old, but even now my parents teach me some things. If I have questions firstly I ask my parents, because they have more experience than me.I am very happy that I can to ask my question to my parents whether or not they will answer me. I am sure that somehow they will help me.
Teacher, it does not mean that a person who has books or notebooks and teachers are not only at school. Every person who teach us even a little thing we should thank those people.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether or not parents are the best teachers we...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not parents are the best teachers we can de...
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Line 2, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aijan, where I am from has such a belief ' You will teach your children with...
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Line 4, column 154, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...cause they have more experience than me.I am very happy that I can to ask my ques...
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Line 4, column 214, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
... I can to ask my question to my parents whether or not they will answer me. I am sure that som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50592885375 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31933310137 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541501976285 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.560157509 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3333333333 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0555555556 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112935934859 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357464020453 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472106918538 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614720228358 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482425079374 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 50.2224549098 165% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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