In the past, it was a common for older people to live with their children and grand-children so that their relatives could take care of them as they grew older. Nowadays, it is common in many places for older people to live away from their families, in special home for the elderly
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of special homes for the elderly
In this age, almost the elderly in many places has not sufficient respect because of several factors such as the generation gap or their relatives are too busy so that they don’t have time to take care of the older people. These are the reasons why the special homes are built for the elderly. Although these special homes bring certain advantages, there still exist some noteworthy drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is beneficial to build the special home for the old people. Firstly, these are the homes where they will spend the rest of their life. In these houses, they can have a chance to access to the high-qualified health’s services by not only the government but also private companies when they face some serious diseases. They are fully provided with food, clothes and avoid the poverty. Besides that, they have freedom. They can share their hobbies with others. It’s quite difficult for them to express their interest in living house because of having the generation gap.
On the other hand, constructing housing for the elderly has its own drawbacks. They can found the loneliness. One person who becomes older only wants to live with their family but when they live in the special house, they usually feel they have been abandoned by their relatives. This easily causes mental problems. Moreover, they will feel inconvenient and boring with the routine living in these houses. It’s better for them to play with their grandchildren. If they have to suffer from any diseases, they will be spent more time on taking care by their children.
In conclusion, however, “ special homes” is a great solution to the elderly who are homeless or don’t want to live with their relatives, there are some negative aspects that the government and the society should take into consideration.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04620462046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54334490307 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.1429730185 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302675258112 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966656516671 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768220184381 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188144920802 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838144849732 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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