A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money. to what extent do you agree and disagree
There are many various ways to define “ success” . It depends on the feeling of each people all over the world. Some people reckon that success is having the sum of money while others believe it is achieving their dream or being a good person and so on. Personally, I am of the opinion that although earning a lot of money makes people have a decent life, sometimes many simple things in their life really let them feel successful.
There are a handful of reasons why people who can earn the deal of money is successful. The life is a struggle and they have to make it on their own. When they are young, they can depend on others such as their families or friends and do not feel the need to make something of ourselves. It’s when they step out of the society , they have numerous things to worry about. If they are alone or have a partner, children, relatives who is dependant on them, they will spare no effort to earn a living so that they can pay some costs such as household or overhead costs. “Success” is considered if they are able to provide them with a good lifestyle and everything they need. For examples, they have a mobile home with all the mod cons. They would like a sense of fulfilment. Evenly, when they have a lot of money, they can have respect from everyone around them so this facilitates them have a real love or friendships in their life.
Another aspect, many people think that fame brings money but it is completely true. There are numerous musicians, singers, researchers and artists who are not rich. Simply, for them, success can be pursuing and achieving their interests or dedicating something to the life by themselves. For instance, Vencelt is one of the most famous painters. However, he died in poorness. Or the medical, science and space researchers always concentrate on figuring out new methods and reports to bring convenience and peace to people. They don’t care about money, they receive much respect from others. This is the success. Moreover, money which is earned by illegal and unethical activities is nonsense.
In conclusion, each people have own circumstances. Therefore, they have own ideas of “success” . When they grow up and become more mature, they begin to have others depending on them, looking to us and they will feel their responsibilities to do their part in the world and have own passions. Each people will find “success” for themselves. Success is not necessary to earn a lot of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80974477958 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83640927349 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510440835267 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5799087589 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7777777778 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.962962963 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18518518519 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143770785276 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557048087008 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707812260482 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110291475763 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024558739991 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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