" In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area"
What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community?
These days most people tend to live in a big city because of its advantages, while in few years ago they lived in countryside where have a delightful atmosphere with some friendly neighborhoods. Although living in the small community has some drawbacks, I believe that it also has benefits.
It is suggested that living in a small community usually creates good behavior and social skills from elders, so children will have a accomplished personality when they grow up. One evident strength is that people would not feel lonely anymore because of the friendliness in the countryside. Last but not least, Owing a healthy lifestyle is an ordinary thing for the people in rural because they lived in a place filled with trees and surrounded by fresh air.
On the other hand, there are some obvious disadvantages that would arise. The infrastructure of hamlet was not as perfect as that of urban. The city has a lot of schools and hospitals. Therefore, children and people did not have more opportunities to receive academic educations and good health care services. Moreover, people were difficult to improve their knowledge because of the lack of modern technology. Finally, more and more people left villages because of a limited type of recreations.
In conclusion, there are plus points to regarding good personality, no lonely and healthy lifestyle. However, the downside would emerge consequently in terms of poor infrastructure, lack of entertainment and technologies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ills from elders, so children will have a accomplished personality when they grow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20168067227 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05316218173 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621848739496 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8260552225 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2307692308 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3076923077 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274395692573 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768066551692 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701395131939 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146746636618 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102569099887 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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