Education makes substantial contribution to children's future. It increases social stability and drives long-term economic growth. It is understandable why many parents force their children on education instead of leisure activities, but it is not really effective to restrict their private time. In my opinion, both education and leisure activities have their own advantageous sides.
Having leisure activities is truly crucial for children in many aspects of their life. To begin with, following recreational activities in leisure time improves children's physical and mental health. It prevents some chronic illnesses like heart disease, diabetes, and even cancer. Besides affecting physically and psychologically, leisure activities also expand social relationship or indispensable skills for children's future. Studies confirm that physical activity can aid the invisible learning process in children. For example, drawing is a good method for children to identify the new object's name easily. Moreover, playing in free time helps children broaden their competence in problem-solving skills or communication skills.
On the other hand, children can be immersed in playing rather than studying. Therefore, they waste too much precious time to study although it is the important thing in their life. Lacking of education is considered the root cause of poverty, and derived children of between job opportunities. That is the reason why children should learn more knowledge to expand their vision and pursue their dream. In addition, children must be educational in order to ensure that there are equal opportunities for them regardless of any race or gender. Finally, children will be a good citizenship if they have the professional education. According to statistics, children with higher levels of education have progressively higher volunteerism or blood donation. These types of activities tend to benefit society as a whole.
In modern society, everyone must study hard to achieve accomplishments, including children. That is the reason why parents put their aspiration on children, and diminish their leisure time to relax. It accidentally creates pressures for them. Therefore, parents ought to balance the education and relaxation time to increase children's development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79228486647 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09016218148 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596439169139 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1254951647 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8695652174 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.652173913 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04347826087 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249903491846 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076006562042 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349609964619 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162824825286 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268463248583 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.71 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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