In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With the increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Instead of working in the office, there is a tendency nowadays that people work directly in their homes due to the development of technology and social media. This essay will analyze some benefits as well as drawbacks of working from home.
On the one hand, flexibility is the first benefit when working at home. Workers have the chance to create their own appropriate timetable without following any strict rules and working hours in the workplace. As a result, the output is enhanced because they have a comfortable working schedule and become less stressed. Furthermore, working at home means that employees are likely to save time and money. This is because commuting a long distance to the office takes a lot of time waiting for buses or traffic jams as well as a huge amount of money for transport fees.
On the other hand, this kind of work also brings several dark sides. Firstly, without supervision from bosses or managers, the productivity of work seems to decrease. It Is viable that employees are faced with procrastinations such as some entertainment activities, leading that they cannot focus totally on their works and finish it perfectly. Secondly, working from home increases social isolation. The workplace provides workers the environment to connect and create the relationship with other people inside and outside their companies. Whereas, it is a difficult problem to keep in touch with colleagues when self-working at home.
In conclusion, while flexibility and time-saving are the main advantages, the lack of productivity and social isolation are pointed out as the drawbacks of working from home. People need to create self-discipline and try to connect with other people if they want to work at home.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87267531539 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54609929078 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4309523091 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298819039616 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113345654441 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581547367391 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210644273943 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571503486509 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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