People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
It is undoubtedly true that drugs and other relevant medicines play a vital role in people from all segments of society. Nevertheless, nowadays, there is a worrisome tendency that youngsters from a younger are getting exposed more to drugs legally and illegally. From my perspective, the underlying reasons behind the drug use at the widespread scale of young people are varied, thereby resulting in several adverse impacts. Consequently, action should be taken to tackle this problem
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for the widely consuming of drugs among youngsters at an increasingly early age. One fundamental justification is, according to sociologists, that parents and societal members failed to act as a role model. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that children growing up in a family with at least a smoker or an alcoholic are more likely to consume tobacco and cigarette at an earlier age when compared to their peers. Furthermore, inappropriate parental guidance in numerous families made youngsters an accessible target for local gangsters or criminals, which reportedly use illegal drugs to manipulate them. Consequently, the severe influences of drugs on not only youngsters but also the community are unparalleled. It will not only result in the deterioration in the child's health due to the excessive usage of medicines in long terms but also forces these young people to engage in criminal activities in order to satisfy their addiction.
Unluckily, there is no easy answer to this pernicious phenomenon. However, some measures can be taken into consideration. The first and foremost action is to raise awareness about the hazardous of drugs. especially narcotic, among youngsters through the education system or television programmes. Another solution that is worth considering is to enforce a complete ban on selling drugs to children under any form without the prescription from doctors. It may, in some aspect, diminish the circumstance that allows youngsters to access to drugs with no supervision
In conclusion, the widespread drug abuse by youngsters is the consequence of the failure in setting a good example from adults, which may lead to health degradation or criminal engagement. Therefore, there should be education or tv programs on this topic and a prohibition on selling drugs to children is also necessary
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Especially
...awareness about the hazardous of drugs. especially narcotic, among youngsters through the ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to access to drugs with no supervision In conclusion, the widespread drug abuse...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
... engagement. Therefore, there should be education or tv programs on this topic and a proh...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2005.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11678010489 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581333333333 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7592824124 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.3125 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248970742856 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676796672083 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522679775159 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133209534574 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587105632206 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.