People are becoming more materialistic than ever.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Public has always tried to find the right viewpoint on characteristics that really mattered yet it has always seemed to be a gut issue. Current society does not focus on moral values and usually opts for things rather than ideas. Although I do agree that materialism is estimated as an inalienable part of a modern personality, I believe that nation has not forgotten about emotional approach.
On the one hand, nowadays men and women concentrate their ambitions on their career neglecting emotional atmosphere in their lives. Furthermore, trying to earn a profound sum of money, humans tend to put emphasis on material points such as accommodation, expensive cars and luxurious holidays. For instance, the avert aim of the modern youth is to represent their new overpriced goods on Instagram rather than share positive emotions in a piece of art made on their own. Hence, there seems to be a tendency among human-beings to stay wealthy despite personal feelings.
On the other hand, young generation is inclined to consider freedom and moral satisfaction as one of the most crucial factors. Youngsters are inclined to travel a lot, collect new emotions and get acquainted with unknown culture. Moreover, photography is gaining momentum as individuals are eager to memorize all senses. For example, my elder sister changed a high-paid job for a hobby which provides her with positive and fulfills life with desire to create. Thus, the more men feel satisfied, the better their lives are.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that despite materialistic approach that prevails at present, humans do not forget about emotional side of their well-being. Above all, people try to complete their best in order to achieve happiness and stay safe and sound.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...s and luxurious holidays. For instance, the avert aim of the modern youth is to represent...
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Suggestion:
... satisfied, the better their lives are. Taking everything into consideration, it...
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Suggestion:
...ieve happiness and stay safe and sound.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19163763066 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87443564277 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662020905923 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9501832058 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0905309499213 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276955336971 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251632359452 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540508020554 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172143946423 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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