People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption?
In recent years, the frequency of sugary drink utilizing has significantly increased. Two of the main cause will thus be explored and possibly effective measures can be implemented to reduce sugar-sweetened beverage intake.
In term of the principal reason behind the rise in sugar-based drinks consumption, vigorous commercial promotion has leg to the large expenditure. To clarify it, advertising agency invite celebrities as an effective marketing strategy that helps skyrocket sales. For instance, after watching My Tam’s video that play a role as a brand ambassador, her follower probably spend their money on energy-boosting products. Another essential cause factor is a convenience of beverages. It takes clients only few minute and a low-price to purchase their favorite sugary drinks from supermarket, store and vending machine.
It is highly recommended that appropriate measures should be implemented to reduce the risks resulted from this burning issue. The government should limit advertisements promoting sugary drinks that are directly target at children and young people. Instead, the programmers that educate on healthy eating and the risks associated with the excessive consumption of sugary beverages, should be encourage. Another measure is the rising taxes on sweet beverages. It leads to the growing of products price that might be effective solution as people might think carefully before buying a coke or a soda.
In conclusion, the advertisement and the suitable of buying lead to the consuming sugaring on a daily basis. Despite this, there are various actions from government that can be taken to discourage people from drinking sugary beverages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 500, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun minute seems to be countable; consider using: 'few minutes'.
Suggestion: few minutes
...nce of beverages. It takes clients only few minute and a low-price to purchase their favor...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encouraged'?
Suggestion: encouraged
...sumption of sugary beverages, should be encourage. Another measure is the rising taxes on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61811023622 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06593840446 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645669291339 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3214916708 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267732632581 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792760656881 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609737747835 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170012778643 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481786464526 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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