People are never satisfied and always want more.
In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is said that the members of society are deprived of the sense of satisfaction and thus, always aspire to attain their increasingly lengthened lists of desires. This, I believe, comes with noticeable benefits and drawbacks.
In regards with the benefits, that people strive to achieve greater goals has certainly brought about several positive changes. Firstly, desires propel innovation and creativity. This can be illustrated by how companies in all spheres of life, from manufacturing clothing to technological items, invest great sums of money into developing cutting-edge products to satisfy their buyers' demands as soon as possible. Secondly, having mindsets that centralized around pushing development forward can also help to reshape communities with better life values. For instance, throughout the years, issues regarding racism, gender discrimination and outdated customs have been addressed and dealt with thanks to passionate social activities and this has allowed people to unite and live together more harmonously.
However, it is also true that if exploited in the wrong way, humans' desires can also give terrible outcomes. To begin with, while innovation is encouraged, a new "throw-away" culture is also being crafted with people regularly disposing of the things they no longer view as fashionable or leading edge. Objects such as mobile phones, shoes, clothing, for instance, are readily replaced with more modern models despite still retaining their functionality. Also, the perpetual feeling of wanting more materislitic things can also lead to greed and crime. A good example here is when government officials accept briberiy to further enrich their own bank accounts in spite of them already being affluent in comparison to social standards.
In conclusion, the insatiable desire for both tangible and intangible goals can lead to both positive and negative results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66202090592 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00615094603 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696864111498 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4160754401 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133842381868 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420305551335 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257878988976 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651707933495 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340311162833 0.056905535591 60% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.