People are wasting a lot of food these days What causes it and what solutions are possible

Essay topics:

People are wasting a lot of food these days. What causes it and what solutions are possible?

Food waste could be one of unintended consequences originating from the industrialization of the agriculture and it has become more and more popular these days. In my opinion, there are many reasons as well as possible solutions as now would be discussed.

Food waste can come from many stages of the food supply chain. For instance, the selecting best quality products to meet customers' demand during the harvesting and producing processes or food losses during the transportation to distributors largely contributes to the global food waste issue. Additionally, the excessive purchase from households is also a major cause as people usually do not cook off all the groceries bought from supermarkets or they sometimes cannot finish the leftovers from excessive prepared portions and hence all the leftover food and expired groceries would end up being thrown away. Furthermore, food storage either in fridges at households or in large freezing containers at supermarkets cannot always guarantee the best quality and these food obviously would be wasted.

There are now many non-profit organizations all over the world with the purpose of cutting down the food waste through food aid projects for poor people. In this way, the food which anyway would be destroyed or thrown away in restaurants, supermarkets, food manufacturers, etc. would be collected and either directly devoted to poor people or would be recovered, prepared and lastly transferred to them. There are also plenty of campaigns to help people raise their awareness of the food waste and its effects on the environment and the economy as well as provide them with knowledge and methods to reduce and make the best out of the food waste.

In conclusion, food waste not only takes place in household consumption but in many other stages of the food supply chain. Therefore, there should be more and more various programs and campaigns from governments, global organizations and experts to educate people on the issue and ways to deal with it.

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Average: 5.9 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'selecting the best'.
Suggestion: selecting the best
...he food supply chain. For instance, the selecting best quality products to meet customers dema...
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Line 3, column 762, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...t always guarantee the best quality and these food obviously would be wasted. There are...
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Line 5, column 533, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and its effects on the environment and the economy as well as provide them with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, furthermore, hence, lastly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21846153846 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89492516587 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5288004402 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223413133268 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910563269764 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359759563814 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143598655928 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277260702377 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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