People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teachers are the most successful. Discuss both and give your opinion?
People's opinions differ whether individuals who make a lot of money are the best or teachers and scientists are the most successful people in society. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and provide evidence as to why I am more inclined towards the latter.
On one hand, in today's society, success is defined by wealth or status. Rich people are considered to be successful and happy in life. Billionaires like Bill Gates, Jeff Bezos are those who are seen as the most wealthy people in the world, because of this, everyone admires and learns useful lessons from their lives in order to improve their own. However, some of those well-off individuals do not get rich by themselves since all of their assets belong do not do anything to help society, but also harm it in different ways such as gambling, etc.
On the other hand, intelligent people like scientists, teachers are not rich as millionaires but they have good personality traits along with the necessary expertise for the community. They are the ones who study hard at schools with an aim to contribute to the country in the near future. Educators and scientists have historically been heralded as heroes due to the belief that intellectuals, their academic contributions, are shapers of minds and thus their influence can last for generations.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that pursuing wealth does not automatically disqualify a person from contributing intellectually. However, I believe that lasting academic contributions to society should be the priority when considering a person’s success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12686567164 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92536361558 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638059701493 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7477964347 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.909090909 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335753224213 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115655544903 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126657781179 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189456098528 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10961501454 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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