People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
Promotion has been considered redundant because residents purchase goods to satisfy their demands. While I accept that needs are the major drive for consumption, I believe that advertisement, which plays certain roles, should not be eradicated.
On the one hand, it is understandable when demands lay the foundation for every purchase. Particularly, while consumers’ desire is infinite, their resources are limited, so reasonable decisions, related to their essential needs, should stay at the forefront. For example, statistics have indicated that 85% of surveyed residents prioritize accoutrements and food over clothes and cosmetics if making cutbacks is inevitable. Therefore, buying what they really need is the norm that social members inherently adopt to manage their budget efficiently. By contrast, if consumerism is taken to extreme, in which citizens buy goods compulsively, their financial status will be threatened.
On the other hand, advertisement is still necessary thanks to its discernible positive impacts. To begin with, only by commercial ads, which apply such various tools as prime time television or social networking sites, can the products’ images go viral, accompanied by a long exposure among consumers. In other words, promotion campaigns are indispensable tools for enterprises to establish brand awareness for costumers, so launched products are more likely to be bought. In addition, if advertisement is exploited effectively, companies will be able to gain a competitive edge. Indeed, when technological advancement facilitates them to manufacture similar goods, a unique promotion which leaves an indelible impression on clients may make their own product stand out over the competitors’.
In brief, although most goods are acquired to meet customers’ needs, I opine that it is still favorable for enterprises to maintain advertisement because of its specific advantages.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: adapt to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in brief, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82624113475 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27516202399 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691489361702 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7600860571 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202417765718 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617296678735 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382623649195 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106931822958 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373795221191 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 508, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...the norm that social members inherently adopt to manage their budget efficiently. By con...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir financial status will be threatened. On the other hand, advertisement is stil...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 794, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roduct stand out over the competitors’. In brief, although most goods are acquir...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in brief, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82624113475 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27516202399 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691489361702 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7600860571 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202417765718 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617296678735 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382623649195 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106931822958 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373795221191 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.