People continue to commit crimes even after being punished. Why does this happen? How can crime be prevented?
It is witnessed that reoffending has been prevalent over the past few decades. Two major reasons stand out as responsible for this issue, which can be tackled by a number of solutions.
To begin with, when a person continues behaving illegally despite their previous criminal records, this can be attributed to two contributing factors. Firstly, in many countries, the government is believed to be soft on crimes. Therefore, after committing a crime, the consequences offenders have to suffer is not enormous enough, so this cannot deter them from perpetuating dangerous behaviours. Secondly, studies about prisoners have revealed that not only do they often lack of professional competence but also feel as if they are segregated from the community during serving their sentences. As a result, due to this insufficiency, no sooner do they reintegrate into society than ex-criminals face an immense barrier to a fresh start, which makes them likely to turn into crimes again for survival.
To remedy the aforementioned obstacles, several measures should be taken into consideration. From a legal perspective, it is favorable for law makers to tighten control over a number of severe crimes. Indeed, if the authority maintains the policy of zero tolerance, in which a heavier cost must be suffered by wrongdoers, that full weight of the law will make them less likely to reoffend. From a management perspective, regarding to prisons, a novel approach, which offers more chances for rehabilitation, is highly recommended. For example, vocational training, which provides criminals with practical skills in their sentence duration, can be a significant strategy assisting them to earn a living and, therefore, steer clear from illegal behaviours after being released back into society.
To conclude, only by changes in regulations and policies for offenders will the challenge of reoffending be thoroughly resolved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47811447811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11336589477 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659932659933 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.093169679 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201959000307 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681607913588 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544049536 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114392691299 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424927896947 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.