People in current generation are not fit and active, which will cause dangerous problem in the future.
Write about hat could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
Owing to the problem which unfitness and less activity of present individuals tend to detreimental is being dicussed this essay with identified reasons and viable solutions.
Fistly, human race is more restless than any previous era due to be survived in the rocketed economy. Employees have to persue unbearable targets which reduce the lesuir time to great extent is reduce the time to have physical exersices.
This could led to series of threats that eventually effect on physical and mental health such as Non Communicate Diseases and Anxeity. Moreover, the physical tranning and exersices are less common in most educational institutions, where the education background is considered as the foremost important part. To exemplify, schools in developing countries reduce or exempt physical education from the curriculum, thus majority of higher education students not involved in the sports activities or exersices.
secondly, it is important to find solutions for the issue, unless otherwise unemployement rate overweight the eployement rate basically due to diseases such as, Diebitic, Heart Diseases and Overweight. Hence, introdusing attractive physical education methods with extend time periods in to school curriculum is a deliberate approach which aids encourage students to have a healthy lifestyle. Futhermore, legislatory bodies have to impliment lows on companies to encourage fitness of eployees. As an exapmle, pereodical medical check-up for workers is legalised in certain developed countries and the employee bear the cost.
To sumup, It is important to reduse the future risks for the people by introdusing and expanding the value of physical education. Unless otherwise it will harmful for the current generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...duce the lesuir time to great extent is reduce the time to have physical exersices. ...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...o have physical exersices. This could led to series of threats that eventually ef...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lth such as Non Communicate Diseases and Anxeity. Moreover, the physical tranning...
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...e foremost important part. To exemplify, schools in developing countries reduce o...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...he sports activities or exersices. secondly, it is important to find solutions for ...
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Suggestion:
... which aids encourage students to have a healthy lifestyle. Futhermore, legislato...
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Suggestion:
...ill harmful for the current generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72030651341 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97894629849 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624521072797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1590902284 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.416666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145856688836 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513064662828 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455229375942 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838075557294 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475304954454 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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