Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem?
Owing to the problem which old aged being as leftovers in countryside by the cause of young crowd immigrating to metropolitan areas. Key factor for this issue is less supportive infrastructure facilities provided for the rural areas and reasonable solution for that phenomena is discussed in this essay.
Firstly, considering the motivative young citizens who seek wealthy life styles for the sake of themselves move in to urban areas which young community being provided feasible infrastructure facilities such as structured education, easy access public transport and telecommunication facilities in to great extent. As a matter of fact, old people are being abandoned in the countryside consequently generating critical socio-economic corruptions which detrimentaly effect on the future generations. To examplify, governments of third world countries fail to utilize feasible infrastructure fasilities on the rural districts, population of young aged has been increased in 30 percent in major cities while increasing the number of homeless old aged people in countryside.
Secondly, the respective legislations has to pay attention on this issue and spare a fraction of inland revanue for this case to develope appropriate colleges, roads, Industrial areas, railways and hospitals. These investments trigger the youths minds to stay on own homes while focusing on the future aspects. In fact, families be reunioned and elders are to be lookaftered by the children. Which is far beneficial than sending old people in to elders homes or leaving them as homeless people. As an example, modern world countries implimentes lows to develop each state or district at same weight tends to reduce the overflow of the immgrants and lesser the number of elders homes in the rural areas.
To conclude, I believe it is extremly important to identify the cause by the governments and provide adequate infrastructure facilities to solve this issue in to great extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, while, as to, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52649006623 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17438468469 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0534587496 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.727272727 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233600630058 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829943289175 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054500005653 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132826278983 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350986969906 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.