People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems. Should government encourage people to move to regional towns?
These days, it is believed that the dwellers who love in the big cities ought to deal with a huge variety of daily troubles. The essay will elucidate several pressing problems which urban citizens cope with every day.
First of all, it will not deniable that one of the leading obstacles in metropolitan areas comes from workload. More specifically, because of earnings, people have no choice but sacrificing time and energy for work without relaxation. In the long run, people are always in status of extremely high pressure and exhaustion. Secondly, setting down in the centered cities such as Hanoi or Ho Chi Minh City in Vietnam, traffic congestion is something irresistible. Owing to a flock of commuters on the street especially in rush hours, it is likely that citizens are driven into frustration and even easily suffered from several mentality-related sicknesses.
Therefore, I agree that the government need to take concern of population allocation, which means a number of people should be moved to neighboring towns. This probably leads to the mitigation of pressure on not only cities but also the settlers. However, the certain and thorough plan in a long run need to be taken into consideration because allocation in population is more likely to exert strong impacts on the growth of the developing cities and people's life.
In conclusion, to keep healthy life and shield urban dwellers from a myriad of physical and mental problems, it is necessary to execute the plan of population reallocation to other regional areas.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'areas'' or 'area's'?
Suggestion: areas'; area's
...f the leading obstacles in metropolitan areas comes from workload. More specifically,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13492063492 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90871662441 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5709737333 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.636363636 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186726541646 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589304611783 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437203613901 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944801021611 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447471797321 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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