People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems. Should government encourage people to move to regional towns? | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems. Should government encourage people to move to regional towns?

There are a number of problems which citizens have to deal everyday. However, steps can be taken to tackle these problems, and one of the most effective solutions is encouraging citizens to leave for smaller regional towns. There are three main issues that seriously affect daily urban life. To begin with, overpopulation is no doubt becoming one of the considerable problems existing in inner – city, which causes many adverse impacts on human’s life such as traffic congestion and the lack of accommodations. Another serious problem that residents in densely populated areas are facing is air pollution as a consequence of not only vehicle fumes but also smoke from factories and industrial zones. As a result, contaminated air poses a huge threat to human’s health such as lung cancer and other respiratory diseases. Finally, family relationship of individuals living in big cities is at risk of breakdown because family members are too busy handling their own business rather than spend time together. In order to reduce these problems, governments have taken many different solutions, and encouraging citizens to move to rural areas is one of the most effective options for many reasons. Firstly, moving people from areas of high population density to lower ones prevents overpopulation in big cities. As a result, traffic quality is improved. Secondly, fewer people gathering in one area means less garbage as well as vehicles, and hence reduces environmental pollution and uplifts human’s physical condition. Finally, living standard is lower in rural areas, which does not put too much pressure on people to make ends meet. Therefore, they can spend more time building tighter family relationship. In conclusion, there are a number of problems that people have to face when they live in big cities. But governments can tackle these problems by encouraging citizens to move to smaller towns.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...of problems which citizens have to deal everyday. However, steps can be taken to tackle ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 1931, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... these problems, governments have taken many different solutions, and encouraging citizens to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2724.0 1615.20841683 169% => OK
No of words: 405.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.72592592593 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.30775115486 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493827160494 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 506.74238477 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.569184413 49.4020404114 424% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.0 106.682146367 213% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.75 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9166666667 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101131922896 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584869259892 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397284104547 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101131922896 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.6 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.35 12.4159519038 180% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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