People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns
Nowadays, in the world there are more and more cities rise in every country.Most people want to live in a big city to find a better lives. However, some of them complaint about many problems they face in everyday life in the city. In my opinion, government have better way to solve the problems than encourage people to move to regional towns.
One of the problems that people easy to see that the environment in the city. There is no doubt that in the city these day is overcrowded, and there are a lot of vehicles come around every minute so that it lead to air pollution caused from the smoke of the vehicles and noise pollution. All of these thing could make people feel stress and cause to respiratory diseases. In addition, people often late for work because of heavy traffic and it become worse in a rainy day; with the large densities of traffic, the accident is inevitable. The carbon-dioxide produced from the vehicles will cause the greenhouse effect.
For that, the government in the developed countries usually build a large park in the cities so that people could enjoy the time staying out of crowded place and relax in a clean environment. Or the government could encourage people to use the bicycles instead of cars or motorbikes to avoid accident and traffic jam, it also avoid producing carbon-dioxide. In contrast, if the people move to regional towns, the economy of the city will fall because they need workers to produce the product and customers to consume their product.
In conclusion, living in a big city may have many problems that effect in everyday life but the government should raise the awareness of people about the environment instead of encourage people to move to regional towns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79530201342 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62609353999 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506711409396 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1538604917 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455707643655 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159541721541 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140943847281 0.0667982634062 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314859334983 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161715075664 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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