People’s lives are becoming increasing stressful nowadays and there are many reasons behind this. Many people relate this to the technological advancement while others say that high living costs and competitions are the main reasons for this stressful life we have. In your opinion what are the reasons behind this? What can be done to solve this problem?
From the evidence of some developed communities, people are prone to change in the normal standard of behavior and include a rise in nervousness. Some people believe that new technologies arouse people's stress while others hold that the living expenses responsible for the issue. Although, these cases are mostly the reason why nervousness potentially has increased, in my opinion, some practical ways can be taken to address these problems.
Apparently, using cutting-edge technologies presents more challenges for the quotidian lives. From psychological points of view, people have the habit of doing daily routine activity very fast and no longer are patient as much as they used to. As well as, Density and traffic have also contributed to the problem as well. It is coupled with the fact that new workplace demands a situation where people tend to catch up fast leading to the elevation of competition and stress. In regard to the life consumerism expanded in developed countries, people dominantly are under great pressure to cover their cost of living, especially in paying to pay a debt or returning a loan. As an illustrated case, just ponder over the 2008 Economic Crisis in which the rate of psychological problems increased by 20 among shareholders of the Wall Street Bourse. As a consequence, nowadays, stress is an unwarranted indispensable part of our lives which is derived from the financial forces or daily events.
Nevertheless, there are a wide range of solutions to alleviate or prohibit nervousness. First and foremost, governments force the companies to monitor or review the psychological aspects of their labors. Likewise, governments must ensure that companies apply their labors at suitable working hours to reduce the stress level. Thirdly, governments should also add more public facilities such as playgrounds, parks, and sports fields for their residents. It has been proven that people’s doing some amusement and physical activities could reduce their stress level.
In conclusion, there are different reasons for raising people’s stress. Hence, variegated measurements in the workplaces and public services need to be applied to tackle this problem. Comments:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, third, thirdly, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45481049563 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01077405852 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6800575148 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.058823529 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.47058823529 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248204750561 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708927983704 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819468263596 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150075624326 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594163869075 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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