People say that animal use to testing medicine intended that human use. Other people say it is not right testing medicine use to animals.
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take the first step on the moon.Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains are irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance the given topic asserts that ; testing medicine, it is beneficial to use animal for testing medicine for human use or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic assertion and good illustration to shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there are a group of people who believe that it is beneficial to animals used to testing medicine for mankind. First and foremost point is, animal is ' part and parcel' role in medicnal life because it is genetically and morphologically functions of body is similar as well as homeo Sophia. Moreover, monkey the cat, dog and frog are internal structure organs are similar as human beings. Monkey is behaviour and anatomy is similar function of body, which is also ancestor of man kind.so it is best way to checking medicine on animals body. A good illustrations of this is the Harvard University was conducted survey, it is revealed that it is beneficial to animals use to checking medicine for human use.
On the other side, there is an opposing group of people who believe that it is not right to use animals for testing medicine. Additionally, animals are diversity of ecosystem. So it is Hazardous impact on environment. Apart from that, the animals species such as frog are similar function of heart and lungs. Many numerous medical researcher used to frog for experiment on frogs in medicnal field. The best epitome of this is the Hindustan times had conducted survey it is revealed that the diversity of animals loss and eight of ten animals die in nowaday for testing high dosage on the
animals.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that , weighing both options; there is no single conclusion still; I take this ground there is an effective clap requires use of both hands
Therefore , unfortunate, everything has double- edge sword but the animal use to testing medicine is not right because it is highly bad effects on animals species and destroyed diversity to die animal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1859.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90501319261 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80905178106 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506596306069 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.9400893147 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1875 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6875 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401466253907 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119649618321 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131383595975 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209810513589 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060787991586 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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