People say that a country will only benefit greatly if its students study abroad. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The trend for students to study abroad is increasing nowadays, especially students of developing countries. However, I strongly disagree with the idea that sending students to study abroad is the only way to help a country greatly benefit.
Firstly, the government often sponsors scholarships for excellent students to study in developed countries, this helps students learn in more professional places, and their abilities are maximized. However, because of these benefits, students often choose to stay in that country after finishing their studies to work with higher wages, more jobs than in their home countries. Therefore, the risk of brain drain appeared, the country not only did not benefit but also lacked the human resources with high levels of knowledge. Moreover, when the country's talents go on to graduate study to doctorates, professors in other countries and settle there, their country will lose highly knowledgeable lecturers.
Secondly, developing countries are in the period of world integration so the level of training and facilities are also expanded and upgraded. In fact, universities have been improved to bring the best quality to students while studying and after graduation, employment opportunities are also much wider than before. Plus, learning in the home country helps not only students but also teachers and the government easily manage, assess quality, find gaps in education so that they can come up with remedial measures, and develop the country more.
In conclusion, studying abroad is a great way to improve qualifications and benefit a country, but it is not the only way. The government can improve the country's education more to give more plentiful opportunities for students to study and work in their country instead of choosing abroad to study.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39857651246 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8381669795 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.8877583397 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.909090909 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288173566818 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131192461482 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801898969234 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213540366621 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829992736163 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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